Hey Hey!
Thanks for your input! Words cannot describe how grateful I'm to see people putting their time in playing the game and going above and beyond to give me their feedback.
1. " The lack of content... "
^ I was initially making more of a Visual Novel but then I realized I needed to switch gears into making a porn game. I had about four chapters worth of content that continues the story from the prologue. In fact, the prologue was initially just chapter one. That's why you might've found the prologue a bit long.
So when changing the gears, I've taken those parts out and that's why the pictures in the OP are not present in the game.
I guess I'll make an option in the game to see those four chapters in the game on the next release for those who might be interested. So thank you for your input.
2. "Your writting... "
^Yeah-while I'm fluent, English isn't my native language. I'll defintely use more reference and work on it.
3. - "Having characters repeat... "
Yeah - maybe not three times going forward LOL - I do think it's nice to repeat to emphsize because I'd like to keep my sentences short and if players just click, click click click, they'd still catch the message if it's repeated. Maybe I could do it more stylish like below:
"The first rule of Fight Club is: you do not talk about Fight Club.
The second rule of Fight Club is: you DO NOT talk about Fight Club!"
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But yeah thank you very much for playing the game and giving me feedback.
I hope to finish the game by the end of the year.
Hope that I'd be able to show you some huge improvement on my game and hope you'd stay on with the journey hahaha - Thank you!
Thanks for clearing the missunderstanding then!
The lack of content isn't an issue in itself if the game is in early development , I simply got misslead by the pictures in the OP that are not yet present in the game. I assume you drew them beforehand and plan on adding them later on?
If I can give some personal feedbacks on the little gameplay/content there is so far:
- The art is appealing to me.
- The intro is a bit long but simply in comparaison to the current gameplay. I reckon once there is an actual game to be played, people won't be too bothered that you try and set-up your story properly.
- Your writting didn't bother me, I don't mind porn games that try and add a comical touch to a rather depraved scenery of sexual corruption but to me (and probably others) it's a thin line to walk on. Witch Trainer's writting (either from Akabur or current Silver team) is a good exemple of a writting I find appealing when it comes to humor that don't deprive the game from its coherence. And it's also set in the same universe as your game.
- Having characters repeat the same sentence one, twice or even three times in a row seem too obvious of an attempt to get your point accross as a narrator and can potentialy ruin your player's immersion.
Take all these feedbacks with a grain of salt. I'm neither a game-dev, nor a writter. It's just a personal opinion and as I already said, I'm really excited to see what you've in store for us.
